I am a Year 4 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 1 and my teacher is Alicia. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Skylah, This is Moira I love the picture you have used to illustrate how you would structure a blog comment. It was helpful when I was thinking about what I would write on your blog today. Have you re read your sentences to check they make sense?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Skylah,
ReplyDeleteThis is Moira I love the picture you have used to illustrate how you would structure a blog comment. It was helpful when I was thinking about what I would write on your blog today. Have you re read your sentences to check they make sense?
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